ODE TO THE POWER OF PRAYERS
In my darkest hour
When in darkness
I did grope
I knew that
There was a
Slight glimmer of hope
If one has ever
Experienced having
Dark clouds
Surrounding you
From which there
Is no escape
Power of Prayers
Is the Ray of Hope
No matter what
One Prays
For matter
What language
if one has absolute
Faith and prays
With sincerity
Surely there will
Be “Opening of the Gates”
Stay the course
No matter what
I can hear HIm say”:
“Lean on Me
I surely will be
There until
The Last Tear
Drop Falls”
Choicest Happiness
Farida Bamji
Aug 28th 2020
it would be nice, m/s farida if in your poem, refer to the word HIM and it would be proper to use the word DIVINE.
the word divine will not refer to any gender for the Almighty.
see it it makes sense to my comment.
Wonderful words.
Its all good and that why its a poem. Feelings are well expresses and well understood in this poetic form. Poem do not have to be technically perfected.